Nature Hums Critique Notes

  • Talk about wind
  • Text narrative needs more of a storyline feel
  • Merced River spec. May need sample 2 so that the meadow lark is more available.
  • Sunset at the end
  • Text in After Effects- Line Effects
  • More shots in HMB
  • Use serifs. text.
  • Larger text
  • Possible panning sound w/ video pan
  • PBS- Voiceover
  • Re-approach the color of specs.
  • Animal circles of sound examples.

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