Rough Cut Critique Notes

Hello all!

Just finished doing a rough cut critique session and have come back with some great notes on what people would like to see.


– Open up with a cinematic

– More B-Roll implementation

– Come full circle with the conclusion, more specifically the “We’re not trying to fool anyone”

– Show specific mannerisms pertinent to Aria

– Need more B-Roll footage of Aria in the world (class, working on the computer, playing games, drawings)

– Use introduction as puzzle pieces -What is this all leading to? Pepper in media to keep the audience guessing.

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