Final Edit Notes
Spell out what the core concept is during the end of the intro.
The voices fading in’n’out are still sounding like a mistake
Sandwich the images of the universal Muslim woman with shots of Alya’s A roll
Present Omar Mateen to the audience
Take a moment to pause and allow audience to digest the and acknowledge the horrific event
Text on screen and or voiceover
The Obama and trump clips are not working
Slow down a little
Be consistent with lower thirds
Brady bunch intro?