Final Edit Notes

Final Edit Notes



Spell out what the core concept is during the end of the intro.

The voices fading in’n’out are still sounding like a mistake

Sandwich the images of the universal Muslim woman with shots of Alya’s A roll

Present Omar Mateen to the audience

Take a moment to pause and allow audience to digest the and acknowledge the horrific event

Text on screen and or voiceover

The Obama and trump clips are not working

Slow down a little

Be consistent with lower thirds

Brady bunch intro?