Final Details for Final Documentary
– MAKE THEM LOVE THE BEES
– Shorter Hive Intro
– Graphics for iNTRO
– Change font for Rule of Thirds / Title Card
– Less Pan in / Ken Burns in stills
– Background Music replacement to fit the tone
– Fix Audio / Mite Explanation
– Personal Info, His life as a Beekeeper!
– VO levels / Redo so it has more feelings.
– Color correction Vibrant.
– B-roll for later even out B-roll
– Overview in the beginning, talk about what they exactly do. Make the problem more out front and less bland.( More impactiful ) Make it more informational.
– Expand it so what you can learn. WHY is it important?
– Half way through. What is at stake? Introduce the Beekeeper's view. How important Bee's are.