Midterm Feedback

-There was no clear indication that Gabe owns the business, we need to make this clear from the beginning

-Show family life, personal life; show how business effects school life

-Being such a young entrepreneur is the reason this topic is interesting; make that point stand out

-No change/conflict in the story

-What does Gabe really want; communicate that clearly to show conflict

-Who was he before compared to who he is now; get him to open up

-Show how Gabe works as an entrepreneur

-Show MINT outside of the warehouse; promotions, events, stores

-How does MINT interact with the community; mission statement

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