Critique #2

  • cut down some effects on the last couple of seconds
  • a little too much and a little too rush
  • mom's audio at the end is going out
  • fix pictures, move them around, and take out
  • dissolves don't need to be there and some need to be longer
  • Millie talks more about her story more before meeting her parents
  • don't overlap things too much
  • spread it out more