Tips For Rough Cut

  • Ending needs more work so it feels more uplifting.
  • Good Emotion 
  • Court house ending
  • More hopeful
  • Organize a bit more story
  • Treating people more like characters
  • More about mary

STRUCTURE

Familys not blood Intro meeting everyone 

Struggle and Chronology are the story 

Talk about adoption (Courthouse) and Family's not blood outro.