Rough Cut Critique


  • Move clip with Shane talking about his class and what mindfulness meditation (move closer to beginning)
  • Take out narration of expand upon it
  • Explain what mindfulness is in a clear way
  • Include more footage of Noah Levine teaching group about mindfulness or supporting facts from research
  • More B-roll and shorten Interview (trim them up more)
  • Work on story structure

Other Notes

  • Text asking questions?
  • Subtitles?
  • Animation of person meditating with thought bubbles (visual explanation for mindfulness)