Suggestions

• Shoot our own B-roll of nature
• Add music (help flow of film)
• Add breathing space between dialogue (B-roll in between)
• Text animation: find font that fits Shane’s character
• Don’t overlap text in Shane’s animation
• Use same font on Lower Thirds
• Dharma: what is it? Video or Text explaining Dharma.

Other Notes

• Subtitles?
• Audio adjustment, some words loud for Enrique
• Addiction Intro: Music? Better Quality Clips
• Experiment with Photos, Animate Stills, Ken Burns Pan and Scan