Final Critique

Suggestions

  • Shoot our own B-roll of nature
  • Add music (help flow of film)
  • Add breathing space between dialogue (B-roll in between)
  • Text animation: find font that fits Shane’s character
  • Don’t overlap text in Shane’s animation
  • Use same font on Lower Thirds
  • Dharma: what is it? Video or Text explaining Dharma.

Other Notes

  • Subtitles?
  • Audio adjustment, some words loud for Enrique
  • Addiction Intro: Music? Better Quality Clips
  • Experiment with Photos, Animate Stills, Ken Burns Pan and Scan