Notes from our Rough and Final Cut

Our Core Concept – Finding Happiness

What worked:

1. Clear Central Character

2. Great B-Roll

3. Photos of her past really helped clarify the story. 

What didn't:

1. Needs subtitles and or narration 

2. Clarity in story and footage.





Final Cut

Finish Sub titles….

Good Transitions…

Title for pioneers music good

Good story

Good camera work

Personal perspective, of how we met Hatsuko?

Good b roll

B roll of her house in the begining

7 min base line

Tighter job of editing would explain
Dramatic development of music needs progression matching the story.

Needs flipping of the story