Our Core Concept – Finding Happiness
1. Clear Central Character
2. Great B-Roll
3. Photos of her past really helped clarify the story.
1. Needs subtitles and or narration
2. Clarity in story and footage.
Finish Sub titles….
Title for pioneers music good
Good camera work
Personal perspective, of how we met Hatsuko?
Good b roll
B roll of her house in the begining
7 min base line
Tighter job of editing would explain
Dramatic development of music needs progression matching the story.
Needs flipping of the story