Notes from our Rough and Final Cut

Our Core Concept – Finding Happiness

What worked:

1. Clear Central Character

2. Great B-Roll

3. Photos of her past really helped clarify the story. 

What didn't:

1. Needs subtitles and or narration 

2. Clarity in story and footage.

 

 

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Final Cut

Finish Sub titles….

Good Transitions…

Title for pioneers music good

Good story

Good camera work

Personal perspective, of how we met Hatsuko?

Good b roll

B roll of her house in the begining

7 min base line

Tighter job of editing would explain
Dramatic development of music needs progression matching the story.

Needs flipping of the story