The feedback that we received during our critique was good. We got a lot of good feed back from the class. Some of the positive feedback we got was good angles, Strong interview, and a Strong intro. Some negative feedback was that it was a unfinished trailer, and we should add some running shots that we including in our indivual trailers. (We do plan on adding those shots in our final documentary).
Good advice that we got that we are taking into consideration is adding some night footage. And that we need to take the viewer on a journey (we do have another day of filming and extra footage that we did not include in our trailer). We are planning to get more footage of Clayton explaining how he got into photography and why he does it.

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