Through The Eye: PHOCUS
Rough Cut Critique:
Love the photography and result. The pics.
Music lower, dialogue UP!!
Up the anti…dig into the process. Why is this interesting?
Discover their paths; connection to Jose and Danny.
More interview, photos, and less music. DIALOGUE IS THE THING!!!!!
Where is the risk?
Denaj really felt like photographer watching the video.
Jasmine was surprised to know that people can steal a style of a photography.
She learns more about it every time she watches it
Sam senses more of a story
cut out all interview material.
Paul: transitions are jarring,
Fix music and sound.