(Don Riggo) After the class saw our piece they enjoyed it but there were some minor infractions we need to fix with our production. One thing they mentioned was a jump cut in the ending which we did catch and fix it was a little harsh and sudden throwing the viewers off. The viewers stated that it got alittle confusing on who Krishna was and his part in the documentary. Our instructor also suggested maybe re route certain shots to help story flow better, add some energy and music because it’s a little dry. Finally they left us with these three words to possibly help the production exposition, pain & hope.