- Story comes across as more about the present club members than of V. Shattock himself.
- Audio and dialogue needs adjusting. The train noises in the background sometimes override the the interview dialogue.
- Concept is now more about a small, bustling club trying to survive. Anything that doesn’t support this new concept should go.
- Perhaps getting interviews with younger/junior members of the club.
- “Life of Victor Shattock” portion (currently our intro) should be moved to a spot where it can support our new core concept.
- Recommended we find archival footage of kids enthusiastic about trains from the 50s and 60s.