Rough Cut Feedback

  • Story comes across as more about the present club members than of V. Shattock himself.
  • Audio and dialogue needs adjusting. ¬†The train noises in the background sometimes override the the interview dialogue.
  • Concept is now more about a small, bustling club trying to survive. ¬†Anything that doesn’t support this new concept should go.
  • Perhaps getting interviews with younger/junior members of the club.
  • “Life of Victor Shattock” portion (currently our intro) should be moved to a spot where it can support our new core concept.
  • Recommended we find archival footage of kids enthusiastic about trains from the 50s and 60s.