Final Critique

– more screencap

– music too loud in spots

– make sure people know the game footage is our game

– add more quintin

– don’t change a thing

– Lower thirds for Casey

– lower punching noises

– constantly running clock/hours

– conflict good

– beginning audio clipping

– transitions awkward (fade to black)

– more exciting music in parts w/ conflict

– end credits at beginning?

– ken burns timelapse at end

– vary music more?

– bring us in to world more gently (too foreign to others, too obvious to us)

– music overdramatic at times (endings)

– expected it to be humorous/ too somber

– character development & struggle

– make it better