Rough Cut Feedback

After having the rough cut of our documentary viewed we received quite a mouthful of critique. One major issue we will fix is the confusion of figuring out which woman is Alison and which woman is Erin. Another suggestion that arose was to incorporate homeroom and the mac and cheese just a little bit more in order to show what made Erin and Alison so successful. When introducing our documentary we were given the suggestion to create an atmosphere first and then delve into the story of Alison and Erin. We have a lot to fix but overall we were told that the rough cut was well structured. We look forward to using this critique and creating an outstanding documentary.