Final Critique Suggestions

-Intro, body, conflict are all present. good job.

-Epilogue dialogue and writing need to be separate

-VO and lower thirds work well.

-Who is Sterling?

-SFX of comics.

-Disguise weaknesses

-Not being able to get in touch with Jason isn’t a necessary component

-Hispanic background can be played up more.

-Single out Specter-X as latino amongst white superheros

-Core concept is not concrete.

-Start wide with “comic book publishing is tough,” narrow in on Enrique

Interview Questions for Enrique

About Enrique:

How did you become a comic book fan?

How did you get your start writing stories?

When did you decide to begin writing for comic books?

How did you and your artist meet?

About Specter-X:

Who is Specter-X?

How did you come up with him?

What makes him unique?

Who is/are his nemesis?

Who are you writing Specter-X for?

What are your plans if Specter-X becomes successful?

What are your plans if it does not?

 

The Approach

We will approach this film with the intention of showing Enrique’s┬áreal life struggles with getting Specter-X funded and published. Enrique will discuss his past, current, and future obstacles within the context of his life and Specter-X’s life. Use of cinema verite with poetic shots, motion graphics, and voiceover, as well as an expository look at comic book readers and retailers can be expected.