Final Critique Suggestions

-Intro, body, conflict are all present. good job.

-Epilogue dialogue and writing need to be separate

-VO and lower thirds work well.

-Who is Sterling?

-SFX of comics.

-Disguise weaknesses

-Not being able to get in touch with Jason isn’t a necessary component

-Hispanic background can be played up more.

-Single out Specter-X as latino amongst white superheros

-Core concept is not concrete.

-Start wide with “comic book publishing is tough,” narrow in on Enrique