This is the feedback we had during our screening of our first rough Cut.
The main issue here was that is not clear what the film is about, there was no intro for the audience to understand what the film was going to be about.
We also needed a conclusion to finish the film up and to show the finished animation scene.
We also needed a conflict element and it was suggested we use time as one of the possible elements of our conflict as we do have a deadline to meet.
Personal interviews needs to be shot on why the characters are being created.
Arnie’s interview footage needs to be moved towards the beginning of the film.
Brenden did not need to be in the film until audio was done, it was suggested that Brenden did not need to be in the film at all since he is not doing any of the animation.
Brenden should have some audio sketches that we can possibly use even if it does not end up in the final piece.
Mike liked the fact that we picked up the camera to film while we were working and suggest that we do that more.
Jerry and others suggest that the final animation could have a meaning relating to our real struggle towards this project.
The footage we took on the ipad will not be used anymore due to low quality and the change in frame size compared to the rest of the media.