Bay Area Sliders
Little less negative space in footage.
More footage used from race.
Description of longboard a little long.
Just describe the longboard, no comparison to Skateboard.
Use more of the footage from the previews.
Music is a little distracting.
Why do they still longboard since its so dangerous?
Connect to Sinjin?
Grabbed right away!
“Bring back the sexy!” (More like the previews)
Amp it up!
More of Cliff Coleman (Archival footage, stories from riders)
Use footage to support story; if it doesn’t fit, get rid of it!
Longboard Explanation (No Skateboard)
So much great footage!
Thank you to everyone who gave your input! We will use as much of it as we can!