Final Critique Notes

narration leading to hindus helped

longer pause after intro, into driving scene

ghostly moo, for mood (good idea)

audio for horns

great, hilarious

disconnect between whats being and whats being shown

polish drawings/new drawings

sequence and variety are nice but too quick, to much info make a slower pace

fix strobing effect on filters/ distracting

not all shots need old style filter

better ending, not leave on ‘you wouldn’t kill your mother?’

“you wouldn’t kill your mother?”, should stay
(recognize what audiences reaction is whether good or bad?)

make a trip out of his interview?

make sacrifices in film

fade barge sound into moo sound.

great audio

use contrast on blue psychic? (better interview)

Treasure Island Lady interview, in or out?
(use narration guy instead of lady)